"Without You" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: lo On: August 29, 2005 14:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I see that you have stopped writting this story, too bad. I really liked it. Your were develpong something really nice. Well I enjoyed what you have already wwritten.
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Title: Good~! Reviewed By: scarletphantom_alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 20:33 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Please do Continue~! As the previous person stated, I also read Heart of the Night and I really love your stories~! Good Luck, Don't keep us hanging~!
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Title: ? Reviewed By: Carly's Shadows On: February 22, 2005 12:53 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: What a wonderful story. I hope you plan on continueing, right? I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Not to sound all weird, but did quatre go to a church? Most likely not, but I just had the fleeting thought when I was reading it. Nevermind, ignore me. Oh and one more thing.. Good Luck.
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Reviewed By: Lady Silverwings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 05:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Not Fair! *WAILS* TWO wonderful fics centering on Trowa and Quatre! Worse I read Heart of the Night and Without You back to back! Grrr....you must update or...or...I'll pull a Heero and omae o korosu! Oh, and I love Duo! I can picture him bouncing all around campus like that! ^.^ Kawaii!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner(not signed in) On: October 21, 2003 02:50 CDT Comment/Review: This is beautiful! and you really must finish it! I love the idea you have going here! Please finish it! Let quatre finally be a stable person in Trowa's life! Aggggggg *down on hads and knees* please!.... Duo Shinigaimi Muse: That is the first and last time you will see the R_Winner beg!
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Reviewed By: DANYA On: July 23, 2003 14:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
Don't keep us hanging PLEASE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Silent Cherub On: July 05, 2003 07:21 CDT Comment/Review: I can say for real that I suck at reviewing. :)I'm not one to point out mistakes or tell that the style of writing is super or whatever. All I know is that I like this story very much and it's got me really interested. I'm also dying to know what's going to happen next, so.. keep up the good work, eh? :)
Ciao.
~S.C~ |
Reviewed By: Shiroki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 02:22 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: hey there... really enjoyed this na, that last bit there had me thinking of "tokimeite harmony" or quatre and trowa's instrumental piece. it's short, but sweet. anyway appreciate the setting and originality of this fic... and i'm happy to see that you've given trowa a more outgoing persona than usual ^-^ ..even if it -is- mostly only shown to duo and heero (and wufei) before quatre... aah. poor wufei, but at least he doesn't seem to be taking it *too* hard ^^; will wait patiently to see more of the five (err six) bishounen interact! ^__^ sankyuu for a nice read! |
Reviewed By: SheiaAkurei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 21:19 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Waaah! Please hurry! gomen... but I love this!! I lvoe all of it!! mwahah. heart of the Night too! ^_^ pweease!! I'll give you a cookie? |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 12:39 CST Comment/Review: ^_^ HEYA! I've read this at Gundam Universe ^_^ And I'll review again. The story is getting interesting and good too. Very touchy too... I mean Trowa there ^_^'
^_^ Please continue the story ^_^. I really want to know what Wufei will do next if he gets his hands on Trowa or something like that ^_^' Anyways, keep it up!! |
Reviewed By: Kaori On: March 30, 2003 08:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's great. I'm so happy that you've finally updated. But I want more! I'm a big fan of 3x4 but also of 1x2 and 6x5. I hope that Zechs will make our favourite dragon feel better. Keep writing. I'm also curious what is wrong with Quatre. I can't wait for next chapter. |
Reviewed By: todesengel On: March 28, 2003 11:42 CST Comment/Review: Hmm.. I bet he's playing the violin...
Anyway, update soon! :) |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 23:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: good fic. update soon |
Reviewed By: Tabby On: February 05, 2003 22:22 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: The story is very sweet and I enjoy it very much, so what more can I say then I LOVE IT !
I hope to read the next chapter soon ! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 12:40 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've read this one over and over again. It's so kawaii!
Anyways, the style is 10, because it goes with the flow in my opinion.
Grammar 9, because there are some misspelled and misused words, but don't worry about it.
Definitely 10 for originality since it's another cute AU fiction. I can't believe Quatre is like some kind of heart patient. I don't mean it in a negative way, but...
Anyhow, like I said this one is cute so it deserves a 10 also.
I can't think of any more things now since I've exams tomorrow. Good work! Good job! Keep sending them!!! |
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