| "Stay With Me" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 20:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Fabulous! A great fic showing the more mature side of Chi-chi and Goku. And I like Vegeta's reaction at the end, tee-hee. Hmm, perhaps round two could be Vegeta and Bulma's scarf experience? |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 21:50 CST
Comment/Review:
awsome utterly and completly awsome. great lemon and fun scene at the end with veggie what more can i ask for. there should be more chichi/goku fics sigh.. hope you write more fics like this |
Reviewed By: GreenEyes276 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 00:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Goddamn!!! *blinks* and you say this is you first lemon??? Keep them coming please!!! Great job =o) |
Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this fic. The idea was very original, using a magic scarf. Overall, it was very good. You don't really find too many Gokou/Chichi lemon fics these days. |
Reviewed By: RoamingLake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 11:04 CST
Comment/Review:
that was a good read.
WOW your first lemon? amazing |
Reviewed By: HunBun On: October 26, 2002 08:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa. Very intense. GREat JOB!!! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow ... that was a GREAT lemon!!
May I suggest a sequel ... involving what happens after Vegeta "borrows" the scarf?? |
Reviewed By: :) On: October 20, 2002 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An absolutely delicious lemon.
(wow, talk about multiple meanings) |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 08:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mmmm, this was so good! Don't tell me this is it! hat about Vegeta? DAMN IT I MUST KNOW!!!!! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 09, 2002 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, this was pretty good! I checked ur gallery and was REALLY suprised u don't have any other fanfics on this site. I assure u, it was a disappoint after reading this. So get some more writings on here, u hear me!? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Joanna On: October 09, 2002 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmm .... Lemony!
I loved it! There definitely aren't enough GOOD G/CC lemons out there ... but now there's one more! ^.^ |
