| "No Title Yet! Help Us Think Of One!" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: rinoa_heartilly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 02:19 CST
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doesn't everyone wish they were that girl, i know i would, sigh, dammit i am thinking into the impossible, dreams are dreams! lol ill shut up now! lol |
Reviewed By: ;D On: November 09, 2002 13:16 CST
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ok, was i too hard on you in my other reviews? b/c you rule! now put up another chapter. how could you leave us hanging like that! UUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ; > On: October 11, 2002 15:29 CDT
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Next chapter have less cussing. Excessive curse words ruin the story. I liked the first chapter better. This one didn't have enough Elijah or plot. Keep on writing. More updates!!!!!!!!!!! Don't think that i don't like your writing though! these are just suggestions. k, before u really hate me n my reviews i'm gonna go now. |
Reviewed By: ; > On: October 11, 2002 15:28 CDT
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Next chapter have less cussing. Excessive curse words ruin the story. I liked the first chapter better. This one didn't have enough Elijah or plot. Keep on writing. More updates!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: :] On: October 15, 2002 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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heya, 3rd chap is MUCH better than the 2nd. I really like this one! lotsa fun and more elijah here. keep the updates coming. thanx for the improvement from chapter two. |
