| "untiteld" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: slayer77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 23:35 CST
Comment/Review:
ARG!!! THE RETURN OF THE HENTAI LOVERS!!! aka. not thats its a complete bad thing, LETS ALL GET DRUNK AND PLAY PING-PONG! |
Reviewed By: olo On: March 11, 2003 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow moremoremoremoremoremoremoremore!!!!!!!!!!!. |
Reviewed By: Da Weasle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooops, this is not a sonfic, I don't know how the hell that ended up there! now I can't figure out how to fix it! :( |
Reviewed By: Alyssa On: October 10, 2002 14:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Easy - just go to Submit/Edit Your Fanfics and edit your fanfic... -_-;;
While I'm here, I might as well give you pointers:
I think your story may get more hits if you change the title. 'Brock gets Laid' is well, a bit... blunt, not to mention slightly wrong and perverted. Perhaps a more intellectual title would be better. Maybe 'First Time For Everything'. I don't really know what your fic is about, so it's your decision to make. Give it some thought.
I never actually read your story, BECAUSE of the title. The only reason I'm here is to tell you your story title will actually make people NOT want to read your story.
This is NOT a flame, merely constructive critism. Please don't take this the wrong way.
~Alyssa~ |
