| "Second Chance for Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Second Chance for Love
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i'm so happy that your writting this story again..i'm glad they are getting married and i can't wait to read more..is she to old to have more children??? maybe a boy or even twins for goku has boys and dedra has girls so twins boy/girl would be nice...just a thought...anyway update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: thracia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is, by far, one of the best I've read. I've often wondered what it would be like if Goku had, or was, married to someone other than Chi-Chi, and I think you've done a marvelous job of capturing the nervousness of taking the first steps towards a relationship and the intensity of the early days of the relationship. I'm just hoping that you might consider updating soon. I'm anxious to know what happens with Debra and Goku. |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 20:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this story. Sometimes it's the story itself that makes the fic, not the charcters. Well done.
Waiting.......... |
