| "daddy" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: bulma~chan~ On: April 15, 2003 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a good fan fic i really enjoyed it just wish it was a bit longer thats all maybe a littlemore detailed but very good well done! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your grammar is not bad. This was so sweet and beautiful. I love it. Very cute. |
Reviewed By: nacobe On: September 06, 2001 21:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was very cute!!! |
Reviewed By: Pauline On: September 11, 2001 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
That is so ADORABLE! I always caressed my sons' heads when they were babies and I rock them to sleep! What an adoralby cute story :o) |
