"Heart's Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: NANI?! Reviewed By: ~*Kuro~*~Jashin*~ On: May 04, 2004 20:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *AHEM* Where to start...Well...VEGETA'S A GIRL?!?!?! *DIES* You've got to be kidding me!! Oh wow...that was insanely brilliant and utterly disturbing at the same time...wow...I am never going to get over that...I mean...wow...A girl...Vegeta...A girl...I mean, I've seen/read PLENTY of yaoi concerning Vegeta & Goku, but Vegeta being a girl...that's just pure insanity...I think Akira T. would be rolling in his grave right now if he heard this one...Wow...that's just amazing...I give you lots of points for creativity because that was just bizzare and unimaginatively...(for lack of a better word)...beyond comprehention. (*sp?) As I've said many many times in this fic...Wow...
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Reviewed By: Sinu-yasha On: March 14, 2003 20:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: great story can't wait for any future sequels. |
Reviewed By: fan On: November 17, 2002 00:35 CST Comment/Review: u finished already.
great story hope u have a sequel to this.
fan |
Reviewed By: Amy On: October 12, 2002 03:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that is really good and please continue |
Reviewed By: fan!!!! On: October 11, 2002 22:51 CDT Comment/Review: please continue writing this fic. i read it the first time u posted it and enjoyed it very much. please update soon.
fan |
Reviewed By: yay On: November 03, 2002 00:13 CST Comment/Review: thanks for updating all those chapters. aww n u had to add a cliffhanger at the end too. please update soon.
fan |