| "Adventures Renewed" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: nightdancer On: December 01, 2003 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls over laughing*
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Reviewed By: DarkMagic On: December 06, 2002 17:31 CST
Comment/Review:
That was so funny!!!! Seto actually seemed nice for once!! Hey, is Pegasus going to get a card coming to life or maybe Malik? Just asking.
"Shut up with you babbling!" Yami yells.
" Sorry about my darkside. He's rather rude. To bad it isn't a girl. We'd get along better."
"You! I'm not coming out of my soul room now!"
"Good! I need to do my homework anyways!" |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 08:56 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* Hmph. Change of Heart is the best.
*YamiPP* don't mind her, she's just Bakura crazy.
*pingpong* So what? Add Bakura and it will be a lot more interesting.
*YamiPP* I would love to find out how the Change of Heart would look, but I have a feeling that it would be more like the Lady of Faith that would be the card that becomes Ryou's tag along. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 08, 2002 17:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the story. It's cute. Where you did you come-up with the idea though? |
Reviewed By: SamandYamiSam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I really wanna see another chapter. By the way...its "joey" not "jowi"..just so you know..heh. I really like the 'Dark magician+Magician of faith' thing..its interesting..and cute..I REALLY wanna see the next part |
Reviewed By: leah On: December 01, 2002 12:06 CST
Comment/Review:
good.its good thats all i can say |
