| "A Week To Learn" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: I LIKEz IT..I BET U WUDD TOO..HEHE
Reviewed By: LIL RED HOODIE On: December 08, 2003 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOZIZ U SOOO HAVE TO FINISH DIS LIKE OH MY GOSH HEHE IT WUDD BE A CRIME IF U DIDNT UPDATE...HEHEHE ;)so SEEYAH
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Reviewed By: Griever_130 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS FIC IS GREAT!!! WHY WON'T YOU UPDATE!?! ITS TOO GREAT TO LEAVE IT AS IS!!! |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: October 29, 2002 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your fic, update! |
Reviewed By: Saturn-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 21:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
BOB!!!! *runs around screaming Bob's name* what did poor Gohan do to you?! I'm so sorry!!!
In case you're wondering, Bob is my friend's stuffed duck who is the #1 stud....and multitalented...he can play the clarinet, trumpet, flute, mellophone....etc. and march at the same time! he even has a hat and his plume is made out of REAL feathers!! This was great!! More please!` |
Reviewed By: Lolita Chiquita Banana On: October 20, 2002 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, I love it!! The only things are that I think there should definitely be some more sexual tension between Gohan and Videl ... and then I also think that he should end up losing, and then he becomes her slave, but she makes him her SEX slave, and then there's a big lemon at the end, and so it's kind of like Gohan won after all, if you know what I mean! |
