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| "Android B" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Secretsquirl On: October 13, 2002 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GHA!!!
I ove this fc. more and more wiht every chapter!!! I'm so excited for the next one!!
*squeals* that nightmare was so real! It scared the coffee beans out of me!!
poor Vegeta! poor TrunkS! Gha! but you did such a great job wth that akward and yet touching father/son moment., you have Vegeta SO on character for that!!
I ca't wait for the next chapter!! Did I already say that?? *scratches her had* ah well....^_^ maybe if I keep repeating you'll get the next chapter out faster!!! | Reviewed By: Bunni On: October 12, 2002 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Saph, old girl, you've done it again!
You made me crazy for this fanfic!
Trunks:...you mean, you aren't already? O.O;;
Bunni:*bonks Trunks* Quiet! ^.^
Android T:*sniggers* I've always loved her..
Bunni:*doesn't hear* Anyway, Saph, you've got my official pledge of honor on the code of the Rabbit's Ears that I will review every single chapter until the end, because it's just so gosh-darn good! I can't help but wonder what will happen next! I also loved the Father/Son moment. It was short, sweet, and Vegeta didn't push Trunks away like he usually does. You made me want to strangle you for not putting more, j/k. LOL, no, no I actually loved it. I can't wait for more, and furthermore I shall force-er, I mean persaude casually for people to read AND review this story! Honestly, it's the best! ^____^ So until later, Saph, this Bunni's out.
-Bunni | Reviewed By: Bunni Girl On: October 12, 2002 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, because, duh! Saph is one of the most inspirational and creative writer's I've ever had the grace to meet! This chapter was not only fantastic, it displays Vegeta's pain of losing his mate and then finding out she was an android!
O.O;; I mean is this an original idea or what?
all I can say is that Saph's writing will always be a favorite among mine. ^.^ You go girl! |
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