Reviewed By: Loz On: October 20, 2002 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the style and premise of the fanfic, however, not much really happens, does it? It all occurs in the one place, in one mindset. As an action fic, this would rate poorly. However, it is not an action pic, it is a pastiche, a character diagram, a lovely piece of register and point of view. The imagery you use is refreshing, and the general writing is very good. Well done. |
