Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 09:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Start for a fic! Good Spelling. You should add more action to the future chapters. Keep Writing! |
