| "Sakura-iro no Chouchou" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I apologize if this shows up twice my computers screwy. i really liked the idea. it's so cute.
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Title: that was so sweet....aww!
Reviewed By: Ai On: June 11, 2004 04:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That fic was so cute...I can so totally see what you are saying about them being a cute couple :) On the episode where they all go to the New Year's celebration together,Suzu-chan wore a kimono with butterflies on it...i couldn't help but picture her in that while i was reading this...you should definatly consider continuing your story...
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Reviewed By: cassie-chan On: February 14, 2004 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always knew Suzu-chan and Kei-kun were ment for eachother! Ever since that Christmas episode, but no one would listen to me, NO ONE. Not even my little sister who watched most of the episodes with me, even after the hint in the last episode she admitted it was "kinda a cute couple" they are made for eachother!
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Reviewed By: casdsie-chan On: February 14, 2004 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always knew Suzu-chan and Kei-kun were ment for eachother! Ever since that Christmas episode, but no one would listen to me, NO ONE. Not even my little sister who watched most of the episodes with me, even after the hint in the last episode she admitted it was "kinda a cute couple" they are made for eachother!
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Reviewed By: Kria Devils [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 06:58 CST
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All ya need to get in shape!This is sad!Your Fan Fic are depressinly short.The chapters are short,and you don't have alot of chapters.There is one fan fiction of your kind that the chapters are half way long and it that Song fic!Don't get me wrong I love Marmalade Boy,but this is sad.This is to all of you!You can read mine,there short,but the section there in has more then 3000 fan fictions.and most of them are long.Like Camp Shikon,that was 77 chapters,and the chapters where long!BYE(>_
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Reviewed By: SakuraChan15 On: November 30, 2003 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the same thing about Kei and Suzu. That at the end of the anime it was hinting that they would get together, but of course they never actually said it. Your story was beautifully written and really made me believe that they could possibly become a couple. And I love the last line in the fic where Kei says he might compose a song for Suzu someday. It was great and you should write more Kei/Suzu fics.
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Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was intense. I got so caught up in the emotions, that I wish for a sequel. Your talent and style are wonderful. I hope to read more from you and also to read the next chapter, though I shouldn't get my hopes up, right? Anyway, thanks for letting me read. Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Mikan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2002 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! And the title, "Sakura-iro no Chouchou" what a clever name! I've been trying to write a Kei/Suzu type story for a long time and after reading what you wrote it helped to inspire me. ^^ Will you continue? If you decide to I'd love to read it the rest! But I do like where the first chapter ended. ^^ Very kawaii! |
Reviewed By: Lemon and Lime On: March 03, 2002 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it! It was a nice piece...you should think about doing a sequel to it or something! |
