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"Yellow Rose, Red Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 20, 2006 20:10 CST
Comment/Review:
This has potential, but it needs a little work. The first thing I would suggest is reuploading as a .doc so that the formatting is a little easier to read. It makes a difference. Secondly I would watch your verb tenses. That being said, you have a sweet little story here and it does a good job of exploring Sakura's character. Good Luck!
 Reviewed By: Meghanna_Starsong [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2002 16:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
awww....dat's so sweet. *bursts into tears* poor shusuren.....*sniffles* awww....that was a tear jerker.....a real tear jerker....but bahaha at shion! :p

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