| "A Little Dose of Devas (and Tamers too)" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: grayfox_2510 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good fic, just one thing, why in your user info says Chapter 2 of this fanfic but there is only 1, you forgot to upload it??
Anyway, this is to "jster1983" Lopmon actually is male, by some weird reason HIS voice in the dub sounds more like a girl. Also, Shiuchon is the 3rd exception of the "As Tamer/Chosen, as Digimon" speking of their Digimon's sex (Male/Female).
Ok, that's all... (I think...) |
Reviewed By: Pistoffveemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 00:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
you're half right, jster. The ENGLISH version's Lopmon/Antylamon is female. In the Japanese version, however, Shuichon teaches Lopmon a male-exclusive term for "I" or "me" or something. Meaning that we've had a sex change pulled over here.
Oh, and as I said at ffn before the... incident... where I called them cuntlickers and horserapists and put a short NC-17 fic in my profile. |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic!!! Please keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: jster1983 On: October 14, 2002 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't Forget about Jaarin who is susie and Henry's older sister. And please list the names of any of the Devas who got partners. Speaking of which you neglected Lopmon or Antylamon the rabbit Deva who is A GIRL. of course she was the first to quit as her master tried to kill her.Of course I'll bet you made her a boy intentionally so please ignore that girl thing. You can't tell by the way she dresses anyway when she Digivolves. I have only her voice to rely on in any case. |
