"Kids Today, Adults Tomorrow" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: GRRR!!! Reviewed By: Veglma, A Insane Reader On: August 18, 2004 21:55 CDT Comment/Review: I'm going to kill Gohan even tried to stop Bulma from fall in love with Vegeta...[i]GRRR[/i]!*Her eyes glow red with rage and her blue-black tail flick wrathfully* Are you ever going to update this fanfic, because I want to read chapter 20! Time for me to say "Hello" to Gohan.*Grins quite evily, she is about to fly off when she stop*Wait a moment how are you got to sent a car? Oh well, time for me to go. *she fly off to hunt down Gohan and make wish he didn't fall in love with Bulma* *Note: Sorry, if you can't understand what I wrote.*
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Reviewed By: cola agent On: June 10, 2004 16:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: good, but you are a sadist for makin me scroll so long. ahh well it was worth it cool story!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kellis On: February 03, 2003 08:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HAHAHAHHA! Like puberty wasn't scary the first time around. Love the see Bulma and Vegeta growing up together. Hilarious. |
Reviewed By: OOOoooooooooooooh On: February 02, 2003 18:20 CST Comment/Review: UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CRAZY FRUIT LOOPS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tammy On: February 02, 2003 16:26 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Totally twisted and hilarious fic! Keep 'em coming. |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 19:51 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I read this story on ff.n, and it is truly amazing! I love it! It's hilarious! |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 20:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: bwahhahaha! the fruit loops!! love it! hurry hurry write more please! |
Reviewed By: vulk90 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 01:57 CST Comment/Review: make more! it's so funny! |
Reviewed By: Tina On: October 16, 2002 01:22 CDT Comment/Review: Hehe, I love this! Just imagining chibi geta and chibi bulma cuddling on the couch ... it's TOO CUTE!!!!!! ^.~ |
Reviewed By: V's Mate! On: October 14, 2002 19:33 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Chibi 'Geta yeah.. right.God thing Bulma can pretty much get away with that! If someone else called him that then, well let's just say they'll meet the next dimension (As Vegeta, so fondly puts it!) Otherwise keep it up, very cute! |
Reviewed By: R.B.N. [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 19:23 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Your writing is so cute! Post up more!BTW you know I think you're crazy but an awesome hybrid with some imagination! Ja Ne.. |