Reviewed By: Jared1606 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, I have always been a fan of fairy tale endings where everyone always live happily ever after. And whilst it was a rather sad fic, and I couldn't help wishing that they would wind up together, that their relationship wouldn't be fraught with so many problems, I found myself increasingly drawn into your story.
Yet I have enjoyed this fic very much, because unlike a lot of the happy ever after fics, your fic really made me sympathise and empathise with the characters. I felt like I was in their positions, and this was only made possible through your wonderful use of language- every word was specially chosen to give the desired effect. For that, I feel that this piece of work deserved every single bit of recognition I could give it.
I love your fics, and I hope you'll write more. ^_^ Thanks for all the wonderful stories that you've shared. |
