| "S&M" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: alex m On: April 04, 2003 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should definitely write more lemons. It was written better than many lemons out there. I love the BDSM between Ken and Daisuke in this fic. It seems so right for their relationship. |
Reviewed By: Mist On: December 29, 2002 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good like the rest of the reviews they're right you should right more lemons. The story is kool. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
not too bad... u should write more lemons... itll come with practice, atleast ur better then i am. acctually, this wasnt to bad. its preety good, really. write more. |
Reviewed By: Récca-Chan On: October 18, 2002 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Daiken! S/M! I really liked this fic, it wasn't bad at all. You should write more lemons. You have a nice style and everything. |
