| "Goggles and Bunnies." Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: water On: July 28, 2003 20:24 CDT
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This is great. I don't usaly read crossover fics because they usaly don't make sense but this one did and I liked it. please writ more this one is defenitly a goody in my books. |
Reviewed By: Shinigami's Kaizer On: June 13, 2003 17:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
you have to write more of this story soon! Please! |
Reviewed By: hello? On: June 02, 2003 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello? Are you still there? I love this story and I keep hoping you'll update, but it's been a while and still nothing. Have you given up on this fic entirely or are you just busy? Please don't kill of this story it's my favorite! I hope you will write more over the summer....pretty please? |
Reviewed By: alex m On: March 30, 2003 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really liking this fic and Usagi's and Daisuke's characterization. It's actually nice to see Usagi stand up to Mamoru and the others without being a whiny crybaby. Even if does mean Rini doesn't exist anymore (I like Japanese Rini not the American Rini). The only things that I can see that need work are your grammar and spelling. It's Usagi not Ugasi for example. And sometimes you leave words out such as at or and, etc. It's mistakes like that that disrupt the flow of the story for your readers. It's a very enjoyable fanfic and I hope you do continue it soon. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV THIS FANFIC!!!! ^-^-^-^-^-^-^ When will Davis join the Kaiser
Davis: YEAH!!! I wanna kick the DD butts with my koi!!! |
Reviewed By: Syko-san On: February 01, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your fanfic!! ^_________^ This has become one of my faves now. Please continue this I can't wait to see what happens. Actually continue all your fics. I haven't finished reading them all but these pieces of art just can't be left half done. |
Reviewed By: Kaori On: January 19, 2003 05:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great! One little mistake - Sailor Moon's name is Usagi not Ugasi. Anyway I like This fic very much. Please post new chapter soon. I can't wait. |
Reviewed By: Yume On: January 19, 2003 01:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it! Please write more! Heck if you need to
bounce ideas off someone to get this thing done,
i'd be more than happy to help.Also it might help
me to get enough courge to post some of my work.
E-mail me if you decide.
Yume |
Reviewed By: Kylie On: January 02, 2003 21:07 CST
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I don't rate you because you would get straight 10s because I love your story. Therefore it might be untrue.
This story is awsome! I like the way you added them together (SM and Digimon). SM isn't my favorite story but that's due to the fact that everyone sees bunny as a person who's helpless. I like the way she acts here, she's not stupid but she's also not a mindless killer with no thoughts of others.
Please continue this story! I love it and would hate to here that it was discontinued. |
Reviewed By: Serene Jackson O'Neill On: December 09, 2002 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've probably got this alot of times, but it's Usagi, not Ugasi. Otherwise, it's pretty good and I love the way you portray Usagi. She's not as weak as people think and you portray it beautifully. Can't wait for the next installment.
Daisuke> Work on your fic in the meantime!
Hush! Anyway, good fic! Hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Me (clever, ne?) On: November 26, 2002 23:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Continue, continue, continue please!!!! |
Reviewed By: XZanayu On: November 13, 2002 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! Can't wait to read chapter four!!! |
Reviewed By: Kitt SSEH On: October 21, 2002 18:16 CDT
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*_* Me likes.. Usagi's a little OOC, but still good ^_~ |
Reviewed By: D. Motomiya On: October 18, 2002 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic except for that little Usagi error. You gotta continue it!! |
Reviewed By: BabyBoomer On: October 15, 2002 21:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ugasi? Is that Usagi? Anyways, cool fic! |
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