| "Goggles and Bunnies." Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: roseangel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2010 04:46 CST
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This is a pretty good fic, to bad it's not been updated in years, you ever gonna continue?
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Reviewed By: Gali007 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
usagi not ugasi update soon please
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Reviewed By: little mouse1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 06:33 CDT
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i like the story alot. please update
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: Dragynx On: April 06, 2005 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most cunning type of crossover that i have read yet. So when will you get the next chapter up? I cannot wait to see how you draw Daisuke to the Kasiers side. Please hurry :).
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 15:38 CST
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i really like this. which is odd because nomally i hate crossovers. the charcters usally dont come out right gut this was awsome. bot of the main charcters actually kept their own personalities. you blended the two as seamlessly as possible. i really cant wait to see what happens. please update soon and you get mega browine points.
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Reviewed By: Rav [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Results for 'rabbit' English Japanese rabbit usagi
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Title: Not what I expected
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 05:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As a rule I steer clear of crossovers, they are usually badly characterized, lacking in real plot and pointlessly entwined with mary-sue visionaries. Thank you for reminding me that some people can write decent plots with two fandoms. I like the fact that Usagi and Daisuke both have actual personality in this story, too often they are characterized unfairly by stereotypes. What's more, I liked the way you took advantage of actual parts of the shows that came up. I'm pleased with the way this story is turning out, you've done a very nice job, and I feel safe to say that I want to find out what happens next. You've done a commendable job with the story so far, and I am most impressed. You have a rather unique talent for writing that is hard to find. *grins* I can't wait to see what you end up doing with this story, please update soon. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 13:48 CST
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I like this a lot, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: jade_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good, i'm just wondering if you'll finish it...'cause i seriously doubt it ends there...well i hope it doesn't end there anyway. please continue, i want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: water On: July 28, 2003 20:24 CDT
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This is great. I don't usaly read crossover fics because they usaly don't make sense but this one did and I liked it. please writ more this one is defenitly a goody in my books. |
Reviewed By: Shinigami's Kaizer On: June 13, 2003 17:21 CDT
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you have to write more of this story soon! Please! |
Reviewed By: hello? On: June 02, 2003 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello? Are you still there? I love this story and I keep hoping you'll update, but it's been a while and still nothing. Have you given up on this fic entirely or are you just busy? Please don't kill of this story it's my favorite! I hope you will write more over the summer....pretty please? |
Reviewed By: alex m On: March 30, 2003 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really liking this fic and Usagi's and Daisuke's characterization. It's actually nice to see Usagi stand up to Mamoru and the others without being a whiny crybaby. Even if does mean Rini doesn't exist anymore (I like Japanese Rini not the American Rini). The only things that I can see that need work are your grammar and spelling. It's Usagi not Ugasi for example. And sometimes you leave words out such as at or and, etc. It's mistakes like that that disrupt the flow of the story for your readers. It's a very enjoyable fanfic and I hope you do continue it soon. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV THIS FANFIC!!!! ^-^-^-^-^-^-^ When will Davis join the Kaiser
Davis: YEAH!!! I wanna kick the DD butts with my koi!!! |
Reviewed By: Syko-san On: February 01, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your fanfic!! ^_________^ This has become one of my faves now. Please continue this I can't wait to see what happens. Actually continue all your fics. I haven't finished reading them all but these pieces of art just can't be left half done. |
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