| "Auguries of Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Destiny's lot On: February 12, 2003 16:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Please write more!!!! Pleaseee |
Reviewed By: Destiny's lot On: January 04, 2003 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool outfits except Seiji's didn't work. I can't what to read the next chapter. And man I want Mia's dress. |
Reviewed By: Tri On: January 04, 2003 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
duuuuuddeee....that was an amazing chapter!!!! The descriptions were beautiful, and the whole idea of Shin not knowing what a dragon was and not understanding its significance is believable. Now...My brain is still wracking on the trying to figure out the pairings. I'm still as lost...::whimpers and goes of the chapters detail by detail::
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Reviewed By: Tri On: December 19, 2002 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo...the suspense is killing me!!!!!! Please update soon! I wanna know what twists in the plot will be revealed in the chapters to come!!!! Whats the mystery about Touma? And the connection with Shuu? And what is the Emperor planning to do with Shin? Questions Questions and more questions that I'm dying to be answered!!!!! |
Reviewed By: MistyFirestorm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 19:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoa.. More intense.. Now I'm on the edge of my seat here and I'm about to fall off... Good fic! Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Tri On: December 08, 2002 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! another great chapter!!!
Your writing was excellent, didn't see any grammatical or spelling mistakes. Your descritiptions are great.
I've been trying to guess what the pairings are gonna be. So far I've guessed: Shu/Shin, Ryou/Shin, Shin/Touma. Am I close? But yeah, what DOES the emperor plan to do with Shin?
Questions questions and more questions that I have to be patient and wait to be answered. Ah well, I ain't going nowhere.
Update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Firestorm On: December 08, 2002 18:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! I was wondering when you'd update this! I hope to read more soon! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah another chapter. I've missed this story. |
Reviewed By: Firestorm On: November 03, 2002 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, that was unexpected. I kept thinking Arago would be the emperor. Nice twist though. Lol. What's next though? |
Reviewed By: Cye's girl On: November 03, 2002 18:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting. Poor Shin. I feel so bad for him. Hopefully everything'll work out eventually. I think Ryo as the emperor is cool. *pets him* ^^ Hehe. Write more soon!
Love ya! ^_~
~CG |
Reviewed By: MistyFirestorm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope you update soon, I'm looking forward to more of this. Good style of writing, good imagination, didn't see too many mistakes in grammer or spelling either, and I enjoyed it. I should mention Cye/Shin is my favorite Ronin/Trooper. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Tri On: October 22, 2002 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! loved this au fic!!!!!! so, whats going to happen??? |
Reviewed By: Skie On: October 19, 2002 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You will write more won't you? |
Reviewed By: Tri On: November 07, 2002 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, I never expected Ryo to be the emperor! Excellent writting, I enjoyed every minute of it. Please please please write more soon! I'm wondering how Shin will react to slavery. |
