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| "In The Arms of the Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I think your story is great! Please update this story I really want to know what is going to happen and if Hitomi's dream was a vision to warn or what. Please Please don't give up and stop writing. The way you write makes things flow and I get totally caught up in the story now you have me just *chomping at the bit* anticipating what is next.
| Reviewed By: manda On: January 02, 2003 19:27 CST
Comment/Review:
im so sorry no one's reviewed. i will though. i prominse. i really liked your story. and i want to know what hapened. i mean, did he really die! *sniff sniff* well try and add another chapter, please.
thank you,
bye bey | Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! I just read your update, and I realized I forgot to review when I read the first one. ...Wow, that's a pathetic excuse. I guess I thought it was one of those deathfics, and I just wasn't in the mood to be depressed.. But wow! Wonderful job! ;) I encourage you to update, and I hope this little bit of heartening will persuade you to continue. This is truly a piece of good literature on MM.org! Such an original style.. Your skills in description are admirable and from what I see, is completely flawless. Even from the little bit that's posted so far, the situations are realistic and well-done. Keep it up!
Keep me updated,
~erie. |
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