| "Hiei is a Father?" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Black-Fire Eclipse On: July 04, 2004 13:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have a good story. I don't know y u haven't updated. Plz do I want to know wut happens.
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Reviewed By: Brittney D On: January 26, 2004 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why DID YOU STOP THE STORY!!!!!! I Loved The Story Well What Ther Was OF The Story AT Least!!!!!!!! PLEASE FINISH !!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BB On: January 26, 2004 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved The Story And Please Please Update!!!!! Please Please Please!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Xander [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have recently read a story on mediaminer.org and I thought that one was the best story this site could offer.....but I was wrong. Your story was filled with emotion, hidden or not. Your story broke my heart when Hiei had to give up Kami, the one he loved. Hiei, who is so afriad to show emotion, one who cannot even tell his sister the truth about himself, through your words found a lost child and cared for it. I cannot wait for the next chapter of your story to come out. To see what would happen with the kitsune pack and what would Hiei do next. Up-date soon please, I cannot wait. TTYL..........Xander
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Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 15:10 CST
Comment/Review:
i wish you could have finished this story it was very good. i liked it very much please update. BUH-BYE ^_^
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Reviewed By: kiki123 On: September 26, 2003 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
to answer your question yes i still LIKE you. please please please make more
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Reviewed By: becky On: August 25, 2003 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story, i am a huge fan of Hiei and i love seeing this side of him. i really felt my heart breaking along with Hiei's. keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Athena & Aurora On: June 27, 2003 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Athena: I love it. It's so cute. I adore it.
Aurora: 1)Awwwwwwwwwww. 2)Hiei's cutest moment(Him kissing Kami) 3)Kodak moment.(When Kami fell asleep on Hiei's chest)
Both:We love it and can't wait to read the rest. We want to thank you for writting this fic for us to enjoy, so here goes. "THANK YOU"
*We've only read up to the end of chpter 2. We'll tell you more when we read the rest.* |
Reviewed By: Dragonsrose4 On: April 13, 2003 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the fact that Hiei could be such a great father. Please please please continue the story. I want, No, I need to know how it ends. I almost cried at the thought of him loosing his daughter. |
Reviewed By: vegetaslady On: April 06, 2003 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, its sooo kawai!!! i loved it, its so cute, it almost had me crying by the last sentance!!! is is a very good story, keep writing it!!! |
Reviewed By: Inume On: February 19, 2003 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics best fics I've ever read!! Kami sounds so cute. Please update as soon as you can. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Silver Dragon On: January 06, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read it and I can never explain the reason I do things without confusing other people. but this one I think I can. it was just so cute! I read it to a friend over the phone and she loved it just as much. I think the idea was a bit inspiranal (any one know what that means?..... hey I made a new word!) I just really liked it. that or I don't get out enough.... |
