| "Written in The Stars" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Oryo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good grief! I was really chilling, reading the last chapter. The complete version is even more thrilling than the version you sent me. The conversation between Wu and Kanryuu leaves us all at suspense at their future actions. And as I said Oibore is such a sympathic old fellow, and I love his view on Misao.
May inspiration always be with you! |
Reviewed By: piyasayo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 01:22 CST
Comment/Review:
finalme he leido el cap. 4. ¿Que puedo decirte que no te hayan dicho ya? tiene una gran facilidad para enganchar al lector. Me has dado una idea para un nuevo pic. Mis felicitaciones y.. ¿cuando leeremos mas? |
Reviewed By: Oryo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 05:12 CST
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I love it. I just love it. Though, you need some time to read a chapter, the characters are full of life, the setting is intriguing and interesting, and your writing skills keep the reader captured. |
Reviewed By: jo-chan(lupe) On: November 10, 2002 15:34 CST
Comment/Review:
hola isabel!!!
bueno, eso fue sorpresa para mi ya que no sabi de este fic, no me habias dicho y esta pag me la recomendaron y vi tu fic y lo lei, me gusta y cracias!!!
porfavor escribeme pronto!!!!!!
arigatoo, jo-chan |
Reviewed By: fujifunmum On: October 18, 2002 18:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Firuze, I agree that it is long for a prologue, but I did not find it at all confusing. Perhaps it could just be chapter one. Prologues are not necessary. Your Enisih reads true, the original characters are interesting and the Tomoe sections are outstanding! |
Reviewed By: Mara Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 04:46 CDT
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ok.... I still think it isn't easy to read (or maybe my English is worse today?). The constant changing scenerey and POV still consumes my concentration =^^=, it isn't easy to follow the 'red line'. But you improved it a lot from the first version I've seen. One point though: it is VERY long for a prologue.
Anyway, I think with the next chapters the plot should become more clearer (less persons and only one scenery).
Take care, Mara |
Reviewed By: Midori^_^ On: October 19, 2002 17:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Firuze, you already know I think this fic is great. I love how you have Enishi and your new character seems very interesting. I can't wait to read the rest! Keep writing! *hug* |
