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| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: pyro_gal4U [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 02:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I luv it and I want more. Hey, becareful when you go to your university, with that new threat out, arrh! the man needs to go straight to hell!!
Love da fic! email me when u update it! | Reviewed By: {*.*} On: October 16, 2002 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Being as I was raised in Virginia Beach, I can't wait to read the rest of this story. Virginia Beach seems to be forgotten by writers and others who seem to conveniently remember neighboring Norfolk. V.V | Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh... nice fic! I know how to kill someone...
actualy, it is torture:) Here is a quote...
"as he flared up his ki enough to light his finger, like a little blade, the man, helpless to say anything, was burned, slowly and painfully
right in his eyes, blood gushed all over and then he died...slowly, painfully." So? how do you like it? belive it or not, I'v never written a fic before. | Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh... nice fic! I know how to kill someone...
actualy, it is torture:) Here is a quote...
"as he flared up his ki enough to light his finger, like a little blade, the man, helpless to say anything, was burned, slowly and painfully
right in his eyes, blood gushed all over and then he died...slowly, painfully." So? how do you like it? belive it or not, I'v never written a fic before. | Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh... nice fic! I know how to kill someone...
actualy, it is torture:) Here is a quote...
"as he flared up his ki enough to light his finger, like a little blade, the man, helpless to say anything, was burned, slowly and painfully
right in his eyes, blood gushed all over and then he died...slowly, painfully." So? how do you like it? belive it or not, I'v never written a fic before. | Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh... nice fic! I know how to kill someone...
actualy, it is torture:) Here is a quote...
"as he flared up his ki enough to light his finger, like a little blade, the man, helpless to say anything, was burned, slowly and painfully
right in his eyes, blood gushed all over and then he died...slowly, painfully." So? how do you like it? belive it or not, I'v never written a fic before. |
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