Reviewed By: Gunner On: September 06, 2001 17:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I must say this is interesting. But, I didn't like how you used anime elements like the sweatdrop. It's an author's choice to use these words or whatever in their fics (I personally don't) but it just seemed...weird in this. This is just (I hope) constructive criticism. I really actually enjoyed it overall. |
