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| "Nabiki 1/2 (A Very Scary Thought)" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Title: Edit
Reviewed By: Dcid1 On: October 08, 2006 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jim Bader is creative but he or yau Shiva should remeber what you name your charecters like Ranma's sister,"Kaoih" as you first named her,but now "Kaoru" like in this chapter.
| Reviewed By: Proteus2004 On: November 27, 2003 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
For all the reviews and hype about this fic I have to say it's one of the most boring I've ever read. It sets up Nabiki as an uber character while the plot is insanely predictable, unbelievable, and overall just plain dull. The main character shows no side effects when it comes to her poor education and upbringing and ends up being smarter and craftier than she would have if she had gone to school in the actual series as well as being a better fighter than the original main character. Basically it's your usual marry sue fic where Marry has all the answers and pounds everyone around in completely unbelievable ways. However the author does show a little creativity with the original characters. But apart from that there is nothing good about this fic unless you like lesbian and gay sex.
| Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 18:29 CST
Comment/Review:
My, such ravishing praise for Jim's (and technically my) work. Well then, you'll be happy to know that Jim just recently began continuing the series, and as soon as he starts writing the crossover between Nab 1/2 and ATOTW (it preceeds the new chapters in the timeline) I'll start posting. So stay tuned, because probably within the next two weeks you'll be seeing some new stuff that's not uploaded anywhere else (save for Jim's mailing list of course ^^)
| Title: Lord
Reviewed By: SybrDemon On: October 29, 2003 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, and btw, on my below mentioned critique, I forgot to add LordWeld@hotmail.com as I just realized that it didn't ask for a return EMail address... Thanks again for the Enjoyable Read!
| Title: Lord
Reviewed By: SybrDemon On: October 29, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had picked up Nabiki 1/2 from an Anime Inclined friend of mine whilst scanning his hard drive fixing a network connection back in 1997 on a little island know as Shemya Island, Alaska. We were both huge Rumiko Takahashi fans, and we had a lot of time on our hands, as there were only 30 of us on this tiny ( 2mile x 2mile) island. I read the first 30 Chapters or so that he had downloaded from a ftp usenet site and immediately fell in love with it. I printed out what he had and bound it in like 3 full sized (3 inch) notebooks and got several more people hooked not only on Nabiki 1/2 but also on Ranma 1/2 as well. I figured it made Nabiki 1/2 an even better read if they had some background on it. I'd been looking for more chapters for the past few years, but always came up empty handed as Jim didn't remember where he had gotten it, and I'd since lost contact with him! Seeing that there are now over 130+ Chapters of Nabiki 1/2 and that I have finally found them has MADE MY DAY!!! I'll be sure to start spreading the word again in some of the Anime Circles I've recently rejoined (since getting back from Europe), of course when I'm taking a break from reading all of the great new Nabiki 1/2 that is!!! Thanks for adding to the world such a good piece of entertaining, well thought out compiliation of alternate universe well woven story (to give credit to your other Anime references/overtones in it)! A Most Enjoyable Read!!! A MUST HAVE addition to any serious Ranma 1/2 fan!!! A++ and 5 Stars!!! Congratulations again!
| Reviewed By: mina mouse On: August 30, 2003 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Twisted and crazy cool. Love this. ^^ | Reviewed By: Meowm On: January 06, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. I saw it on fanfiction.net before they removed the nc-17s, and i saw it again here so decided to read it. I'm surprised more people haven't read it, because it's really good, but on the other hand it's reaaaally long. It might be that that's scaring everyone away. But also this site doesn't have as many people visit it as fanfiction, so, whatever. I like this a lot, even though I'm only up to chapter 20, I'll finish it soon!
| Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Jim has already written chapters 130-133; Angecobra, Jim's webmaster, just hasn't posted them yet. Once I get all the chapters up, this will be the first place you will find new chapters, and you might want to re-read the old chapters, because ALL of the plot holes, and grammatical errors have been fixed.
Oh, and the numbering after 106 is slightly different. Because 'A Tale of Two Nabikis' is really part of the main story, I included it in there, so it takes the name of chapter 107. To find the correct chapter after 106, add 4 to the chapter number. So, for example, when I'm finished chapter 133 will be posted here as chapter 137. | Reviewed By: MAC On: October 17, 2002 07:12 CDT
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Hey, when will Jim Bader continue the next chapter in Nabiki 1/2? He finish part 129 and I curious when he going to start part 130. |
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