| "My Lover My Master" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: HEY!
Reviewed By: Annonymous Lemon Reader On: August 05, 2004 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell happened?!?! UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was really good. Nicely written except for a few spelling and grammatical errors. If you need a good beta reader, just e-mail me at immalonelylover@yahoo.com. I know I'm probably destined to become a teacher someday, so you can count on me. Anyways, I love your story so far, it's really nice, and I'm a sucker for angsty/hentai stories like this. Keep up the good work, and update!
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Reviewed By: leafless666 On: October 09, 2003 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Admittedly, the writing had some flaws, but I felt that there was much power coming from the thoughts behind it. And it was very clever of you to end the story the way you did. Azure's psychological war with herself, to me, clearly ended in defeat on so many levels, although the defeat allowed her to come to an agreement with her captor, and a sort of unsettling peace with herself. Overall, I found the story to be very dark and disturbing, as I'm sure it was meant to be, and I wouldn't have it any other way. I congratulate you for working with subject matter that many might steer clear of, and coming up with something worthy of being called art.
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Title: THOSE POOPHEADS!
Reviewed By: Jennyjenjenjennifer On: October 08, 2003 19:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
They cut out my l337 C++ comments! Those l00serz! I hate j00, mediaminer!!!!!
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Title: Wholovesyou
Reviewed By: Jennyjenjenjennifer On: October 08, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heehee, they let me use HTML... but nothing FUN... why can't I use C++? #include ("iostream.h") cout
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Reviewed By: Glitter Gal On: March 29, 2003 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would say this is one of the most brilliant stories I have read in a long time. I can’t wait to see more! Don’t keep your fans waiting for to long now! (the story really got me horny, nice going!) |
Reviewed By: Arrow_Windrider [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 20:24 CST
Comment/Review:
sorry bout that x out that last E-mail adress (mine is Romeo_Veltrez@hotmail.com) |
Reviewed By: Arrow_Windrider [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I love this fan fic and its because of this you have inspired me to write my own fic kinda like this but not. I was also wondering if there is anything I can help with in this fic just ask, the Emails Arrow_Echidna@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: anonygirl On: October 21, 2002 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
-blush-well i really like your story
>:) |
Reviewed By: holly On: April 04, 2003 12:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue! I long for reading your next chapter!! |
