| "The God Center" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 08, 2002 21:00 CST
Comment/Review:
This is good so far, keep it up! The only thing I would add would be maybe a few more details. Also, it was a little wierd to have the POV change in the last few chapters. I think you should stick with what you originally had. |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
KittyKat: I keep reviewing because I LIKE TOO! -hides behind a Suuichi plushie- No..don't hit kitty!;-; Anyway. Like it still so far! Waiting for the lemony fresh part...-snicker- MAKE YAMI A REAL BOY!! xD
YamiDominick: Er..-sweatdrop- Don't mind my hikari..she's..odd..
KittyKat: WAIT YOU'RE THE HIKARI!
HikariDominick: Oh right! Oh well. Don't mind my YAMI! She's still as odd as ever. |
Reviewed By: Angel On: October 20, 2002 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
::sniffs:: Yami is so sweet to try and make yugi feel better and it was about time he made that kiss too! Anyways its a great fic i really like how you weaved sci-fi and the yugioh series together.........it was so kawaii!! ::hugs yugi crying hysterically:: |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 23:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liiiikie Yami experiments -snickers- Yaaaaamiiiii and Yuuuugggiiiiiiii are cooooooolers couple duuuude..keeeep it up. -has twitching attack- xD |
Reviewed By: Project Freedom On: October 18, 2002 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's not a bad fic... The problem is, it's too short... You should try and update it faster.
P.S.:Yeah, I know how hard it is to write a good fanfic fast, but... Please try... K?*puppy eyes look*
Project Freedom |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
-hands lollipop- I like it so far. Please continue ^^ Love the idea of experiments..wonder why it reminds me of Pokemon the First Movie..-sweatdrop- Oh well. Keep up the good work dude..which reminds me..I should update my ficcie -bigger sweatdrop- |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was kawaiiiiiiiiiii!!! ::squeals like a mad fangirl:: Yugi-chan and Yami-kun are sooooo cute together ... ::goes starry-eyed:: What about Ryou-chan, though? Is he gonna be in the ficcie? Pweeeeese?? Oh, and who were the other perfect (and non-perfect) experiments? Are they charries from cannon? Can't wait to find out!! |
