Reviewed By: WacheyP87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I generally understood what you were trying to say, and I enjoyed the fic, but you have a lot of grammar mistakes in this one. Keep up the good work, try to improve grammar, and update soon! |
