| "My Fair Yami" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 03, 2003 23:14 CST
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Wow. This is written wonderfully. So realistic. The concept is new to me, so it's refreshing as well. I eagerly await the conclusion. It seems to me that Yugi has melted Bakura a bit. The Ryou/YamiYugi soul room scene was great. |
Reviewed By: Amethyst On: November 02, 2002 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's me again. This chapter was really good and I can't wait foe the next one. I'm really glag that Yugi/Ryou didn't get die or get raped. ^_^ Poor Ryou he thinks that Yugi is dead. -_-, * Hits Bakura *_* * Don't ever hurt Yugi or Ryou again, it's not nice. * Gives thumbs up to Madyamisam * This story is awsome so far, good luck with the rest. |
Reviewed By: Taure [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 20:57 CST
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Yeah, I've already had a comment, but hey, new chapter. Poor Yugi *the real one!* At least Ryou finally caught a break. I love your story, just added you to my favorite authors list! Yay, can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: Tsuki_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 19:29 CDT
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Waaaaaaah!!! ;-; Poor Yugi!!!*Huggles Yugi* I like this ficcy even though Yugi's getting hurt...I gotta admitt, it's neat. I have one more ficcy of yours to read! ^o^ Write more to this and your first ficcy!!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 06:53 CDT
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*crying* OH GOD I'M SO SORRY!!!! There was a glitch in the programme and I had to take it off. Evidently any reviews that were there earlier have been unintentially wiped out.
I do appreciate all your reviews especially since all my 2 other fics are turning out to be a couple of flops.
And I'll put a new chappie up as soon as I can. Which is cool because now I'm on a half term break. Luv you all. Ja.
Madyamisam |
Reviewed By: Amethyst On: October 24, 2002 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is me second review for this story, but the first one isn't there anymore ( I was the first one to review your story. ^_^ ). So this is for both chapters, K. This is so sad and so good. Poor Yugi and still it's a yay for Ryou. Which is kind of confusing. I hope Yugi doesn't get hurt to much, that just wouldn't be write. Don't get me wrong it's not write when Ryou is getting to crap beaten out of him and Ryou is my favorite character to, so please be nice to both of them. But you left me hanging now I have to wait till you write the next chapter. Please get it up soon, pretty, pretty please with sugar on top.
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Reviewed By: Achika On: October 24, 2002 15:21 CDT
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you're going to stick Yugfi with Bakura aren't you?! How horrible! Yugi doesn't deserve such an abusive Yami, although Ryou doesn't either. Having them switch bodies? That's a new one. |
Reviewed By: Taure [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 18:46 CDT
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Melikes! *sits in corner jealous that she can't come up with cool story ideas* Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: maliks gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 14:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!
Get the picture? |
Reviewed By: tefla [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this fic so far ... please oh please continue |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 15:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it ^^ |
Reviewed By: maliks gurl On: October 20, 2002 09:36 CDT
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u really should continue......but if what happened has happened, plz dont hurt yugi too much. wait, what am i saying! im with malik! where is he anyway?? |
Reviewed By: Angel On: October 20, 2002 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::cries hugging Ryou:: How could you hurt him! ::sniff:: so sweet, so innocent...............no wait scratch that cause i had no idea Ryou would be into that occult thing ::looks at the crowd sweatdrops:: not that i'm saying it's bad he had his reasons!! anyway long comment short keep going..................but try not to hurt Ryou! ::whispers:: at least not too much. ::hugs Ryou ^_^:: |
Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 21:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cm: HOLY F****** S*** What the hell did you do to Ryou!? He's yugi now? IIE!!!! (starts crying)
Mad: There, there, we all know you like seeing Ryou get beat up by Bakura. But it could not be helped!
Cm: You know. It's yugi that's going to get beat up now instead of Ryou?
Mad: WHAT THE F***!?
Cm: (snickers) You gotta love it when your hikari freaks out. Must continue! Or I'll us your blood as an offering to the almighty goddess of SUGAR! hehe Ja!
Yugi and Ryou: o.o0 |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 11:05 CDT
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I likes. I really likes. Please continue! Hehe... spells, enchantments, and maaaagical rings oh my! xD Don't mind me..four sodas in one morning isn't helping me.. |
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