Reviewed By: Sailor Mercury On: October 20, 2002 13:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I found this story to be quite intriging. Your writing style is wonderful and creativity is ok. You could have been more original, by this I mean, you used Sailor Moon. I enjoyed this, but girl/girl relationships are a little over-rated when it comes to the senshi. I highly doubt they actually feel this way. I really liked, and I hope you continue writing. Even if they are shoujo ai. I'd very much like to see more stories by you. Keep up the good job. |