| "Makoto's Friends with a Lesbian" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 07:39 CDT
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You are a good writer!!! I love the detail yet how it has fluff as well!!! Oh question are you a guy or a girl?
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Reviewed By: thean On: May 07, 2004 22:54 CDT
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Lovely fic - it's funny and it flows well, and it's surprisingly believable for pure hentai. Go you.
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Title: Makoto's Friends with a Lesbian
Reviewed By: eternalskyking On: May 03, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT though chap 1 could've have much more graphic ^__- But chap 2 was outstanding keep write more of these fics they're just WOW!!
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Reviewed By: unknown00 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 18:36 CST
Comment/Review:
no words can describe how much I love your writing. you rock!!!
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Reviewed By: bf4elandj On: September 22, 2003 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course I am going to give you a 10 you're the best story writer ever. Jill
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Reviewed By: Aries On: July 29, 2003 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was much better then the first chapter. Lots of detail. |
Reviewed By: Aries On: July 29, 2003 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only complaint I have is the lack of detail's. I was really hoping to gain a few ideas from this.
Good story though. |
Reviewed By: sandy On: June 22, 2002 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed ur fic and hope u can keep it up.bye!!!!! |
Reviewed By: knuckle2knuckle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that was great! You are the best hentai writer I've ever seen, and this is one of the best stories you ever wrote! So, don't stop there, I wanna know what happens next. And, just wondering, are you an actual lesbian? 'Cause you seem to write best about bi girls.^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jet On: March 01, 2002 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very kool fanfic |
