Title: Great Story Reviewed By: SailorJane [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2010 12:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well of course it was great to see Ami break out of her shell and the chemistry between her and Mako was great. Subjective writing style was good too, sort of stream-of-consciousness Salinger-like writing. Great job!
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