| "Orgy Time" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kreton [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think you could have done better. It was not a bad concept but it felt rushed, and the they were all out of charater. Plus it is hard to set a mood when you have to stop to try and figure out what word you are trying to spell. You should not give up. Just try to make it better next time. BTW the only reason I am revewing this is because I read the reviwes you had, and they all said it was great, when, it fact it was lacking. |
Reviewed By: Lem0n L0ver On: October 20, 2002 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmmmmmm ... lemony!
You should definitely continue this ... like have the girls begin meeting weekly or something, and then their husbands catch them and decide to join in ... or something delicious like that!!
Yay for orgies!! |
Reviewed By: MasterMind On: October 20, 2002 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is VERY good. Never seen this kind of fic. Nice! |
Reviewed By: Goku's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a nice tist to the ladies. Well done. |
Reviewed By: Konishiwa On: October 20, 2002 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!! This story makes me think of wrong things. Oops! It's all about girls! |
