| "Chibi Usa and Hotaru: One Moment in Time" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 08:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I think this is one of your best because you have the conflict of feelings and the advice asking!!! It made it seem liek something that could happen in real life which is what i enjoy!!!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: EcchiHalf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 09:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, this was actually quite good! The dilemma made for some nice plot/character time, something too rarely found in lemons. Best though, was the non-stereotypical sex scene. It was so far removed from the classic cliche lesbian scenes, sticking with plot and story instead. It proved that the story was not a setup for Usa and Hotaru to have steaming lesbo sex (since there was none ^_^), which really gained my respect. |
