"First Snow of the Year" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: December 12, 2002 04:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: SSSAAAAPPPYYYYYYY,...SAP,SAP,SAP,SAP,....SSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DDAAAMNNNNNNNN SSAAAAAPPPYYYYY,...i think i've a tooth-ach or somethin,....LLLOOOVEEEE this fic of yours,...SSSWEEETTTT,...2+1/1+2 FFFFOREEVERRRRRRRRRRRRR,....keep-up the good work kay,...till next time,...JAAAAAAAA and GAAANBATEEEE-NEEEE!!^_~!! | Reviewed By: loko-sama On: November 22, 2002 00:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AAAAH!!! WA~I!!! I've got the CUTEST images of Heero in my head bcuz of ur fic! SOOOOOOO KAWAII!!!!!! Domo arigato gozaimashita! That put a light in my day! Great ficcie! So kawaii! ... I'll stop ranting now ... and hair *is* a good scarf! | Reviewed By: darkmus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 16:13 CST Comment/Review: Waiiii!!! That's sooo cuteeee~!! ^o^
Yes, normally, I see Heero has the "hot, sexy one" and Duo as the "cute, sexy one"... o.O```
But you make Hee-chan so cute! ^_____^
I like your underlying soft angst (me like angst.) and I adore how you portray Duo's character.
Favorite line: "... I mused and punched my fists deeper into the pockets of my coat" That's great imagery there, baby. ^.~
~mousie | Reviewed By: something like human [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 19:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: KAWAII!!! that was diabet-shock-inducing! and i've actually done that with my hair too... and also used it to pretend to hang myself in a really boring class last week. anyways...great fic! |
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