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| "Ranma 1/2: How the Other Half Feels" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, that was a good fic! I need to get more into the Ranma section if this is any judge of the stories in it! It was introspective, perverted, and thought provoking, and I loved each and every moment of it. I think the only way to improve on it would be to give my lecherous side a continuation piece where Ranma starts to experiment with other girls, not just him/her self.
| Title: wow...
Reviewed By: TP On: August 09, 2004 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... ummm... Wow. I've read a lot of FanFics and personally that was one of the best, if not THE best. Your use of the characters was natural and the detail amazing. If it weren't for the fact that this is only text, much to my lament as I cannot express the full realm of greatness that this covers, I would applaud you. It was a hentai flick that managed a reasonally believable plot, a talent sadly lacking in this field. Seen better but not in a LONG LONG time.
| Reviewed By: Lady Sekhmet Ka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is a first, most people just write a PWP. I really liked the character development I saw in this fic. It makes the ecchi parts more palatable, and it goes into the mind set of Ranma that we just don't get in the manga or anime. I'm looking forward to reading other fics by this author. | Reviewed By: asshole On: January 07, 2003 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
i fucking hate you. | Reviewed By: Shiva-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2002 01:41 CST
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Well, I've read better...but not in a while. I commend you on using a topic that's unique, at least to me, and I doubt it could have come out much better. The only downside I saw to it was that during the hentai scenes, sometimes you got to clinical with the names and sensations, but other than that it's pretty good. | Reviewed By: Ran-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2002 15:17 CDT
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You guys did a pretty good job with this fic.I really wouldn't call it a hentai, because it's so much more than that.It's not so much about sex, but about finding peace and self acceptence.
It was really clever, you guys have got Nabiki Tendo pinned, I would imagine the "real" Nabiki acting exactly like yours did.
Other than that, let me just say that I have always wondered how the other half feels, and I always thought, like Nabiki, that Ranma has a great advantage, so I really liked your fic.
Keep on writing, you're doing great!
Ja ne,
Ran-chan | Reviewed By: none of your bussiness On: April 17, 2002 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow
stupid story what kind of hentai was that? | Reviewed By: gourrina_chan On: September 07, 2001 06:35 CDT
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This fic is good keep Up the good job!!!!!!!!! |
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