Reviewed By: Dawn Dusk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 18:46 CST
Comment/Review:
um yeah. I think you have an okay idea on the whole main story, but u didn't build on the plot, so it wasn't the most exciting thing to read. but ya know practce does make perfect. keep trying. (i no this from experience 'practice makes perfect') yup it really duz. keep it up! ^__^~Dawn Dusk ^__~ |
