| "Haunted Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Mistress_of_the_Night On: July 06, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is really good. I really liked it I hope that you'll make some more to this I hope that you'll keep going on this it's really good. I hope to read some more of this fic I just love it Joey, Seto, Yugi, and Yami are my favorite charactors. Well I'll talk to ya's later.
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 05:57 CST
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O.O that your first lemon? *looks around* i have a hard time believing that... you have EXPERIENCE! *flashes peacesign* n e way, i'm half asleep, it's four in the morn, so i'm goin to bet *yawns* update!!!
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Title: haunted Dreams
Reviewed By: NightDancer On: December 01, 2003 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God would you finish this?? Lol I was sooo into it and went to click for the next chapter practicaly squealing happily over the flow of it, and screaming over how short the chapters were, and they ended!! *whimpers* I realllly like this one, lemony limey or not, it's got a great work on it!
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Reviewed By: jimbob On: July 13, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow good fic cant wait untill the next chappie hurryup and put it up it has been a while since u last updated ya know |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 08:56 CDT
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Very interesting story. It's a nice start. Though some things seemed to be a little rushed. Try not to rush towards the end that fast. Keep it up and update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Inu-girl On: May 24, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing! Don't just leave us hangin'! |
Reviewed By: Iyasu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 19:18 CST
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This was great, just one thing wrong... and that is more lemons! ^_^ You have to write more yaoi period. Yaoi makes the world go round! I'm writing a Yami/Yugi story at the moment...it's getting there... |
Reviewed By: Rinchan's flower On: January 02, 2003 01:39 CST
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Personally I'm not a big Yu-Gi-Oh fan, I just like the Yami/Yugi Hentai's ^_^. but this is a great fic! Please continue it! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dark_Fox On: December 06, 2002 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes ur story is here. (I am Fox_Demon from FanFic.net) |
Reviewed By: holo On: November 30, 2002 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Loved your story! I just love Yami/yugi fics! Please write more! Ive been waiting for a while. |
Reviewed By: Serene Jackson O'Neill [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2002 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, and pretty good lemon...probably better than my own.
Yami>Like you've actually written a SetoxJou lemon.
Seto> You've only done YamixYuugi and barely started a BakuraxRyou.
Leave me alone! I'm working, i'm working! Anyway, great fic and please update!
Bakura> And read her 'Yuugi's Decision' and tell us how bad it is. ::grins evily while Serene sweatdrops:: |
Reviewed By: DarkWitch On: October 31, 2002 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleez continue I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Tipola [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 17:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep writing me and all my freinds love your work |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 17:19 CDT
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Actually, I dunno if it was your first, but oh well. ^^;;; I liked the thing in the last chapter about the hinted Ryou/Bakura. ^.~ That's one of my fave couples in YGO. ^^ I really like Yami/Yugi too, though, so I'm hoping you give them their turn too!!! Can't wait to see the next chapter!! Ja ne, minna-chan!! |
Reviewed By: Lee Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good story. Personally I don't like my cute as heck Joey being gay, but you know, he's good for the part lol! ^-^ So it's cool with me. The whole Yugi and Yami thing is soooo cyoote!! Haha, keep up the good work and I'll keep reveiwing ^_~ |
