| "Torturous Chimera" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Sammeh On: March 02, 2003 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good so far. You should try to make the chapters a bit longer though. The storyline is pretty good though and I hope that you continue to write on it. |
Reviewed By: Sammeh On: March 02, 2003 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good so far. You should try to make the chapters a bit longer though. The storyline is pretty good though and I hope that you continue to write on it. |
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat On: March 01, 2003 03:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We have been waiting patciently for some time but you never update! I like the story and I want to know what happens but c'mon you just keep revising the same part. Are you ever going to finish...or at least get to chapter 1??? Please write more! |
Reviewed By: miakalili On: January 07, 2003 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the beginning of this story. It has a great set-up and excellent imagery. You most definitely have to continue with this story. You have left me thinking all sorts of things, including what happened to Vinnie. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: miakalili On: January 07, 2003 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the beginning of this story. It has a great set-up and excellent imagery. You most definitely have to continue with this story. You have left thinking all sorts of thing, including what happened to Vinnie. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Seki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 00:40 CST
Comment/Review:
It is a very interesting start. I'm kind of new here.. can I get notified for your stories updates? seki_shinigami@yahoo.com if you get around to it. I want to read what comes next. It is good. Like like how you describe everything especailly the silent gestures of the children that speak louder than any words anyone could give them. |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: October 26, 2002 22:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
intresting start and hope we have more soon |
Reviewed By: Tamar White ;) On: October 23, 2002 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Numerical ratings for Style and Originality! Blech. But anyway, great work michi! You've really come a long way. And I really wanna know what happens! Mucho Kudos Chica!
-TheRachel |
