| "Sweet Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Praise and a Question
Reviewed By: HentaiFan308 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALL 10's! LOVE your work! Would you let me write a sequal since you're not? PUHLEEEEEEEEEEESE! *heart heart heart heart heart*
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Reviewed By: Shinigami's Nymph On: November 01, 2004 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I usually don't review that often unless I enjoyed the fic that much that it left me wanting to read it over and over again. This has got to be one of the most original fic's I've read in a long, long time and I have to say I enjoyed EVERY last bit of it. I love how the characters were developed and seemed to come "alive". Although, I'd love to see a little improvement on the lemons, I hope you keep posting!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Kico Yushimi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's me Kico OMG your gonna leave me hangin? I want to kno what happens with this story. But anyways i loved it like all your storys. It was well played out oh and please Review my story and tell me what u think so far or u can just e-mail me. Well anyways talk to ya later Kico Yushimi ^_-
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Reviewed By: nix On: June 07, 2003 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the BEST fanfics I've ever read.
I enjoy all your fics enormously and this is definately one of the ones that gave me the most pleasure. |
Reviewed By: starcrest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2003 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea was great. The way you were going was great. The way you delivered and ended it was absolutely horrible. My suggestions:
1.) Tone down Tai's homophobia a tiny bit. Yes, the homophobic part was an excellent idea, but really, I don't think Tai would get THAT excited.
2.)This whole story... it dealt with pyschological things (that's the best way I can put it)... What happened between the two was an accident, that much is obvious enough. From the way you were going with Joe and Izzy's diagnoses, Matt really does seem to be using Davis as a substitute for Tai and TK... Fix that! Let him go after Tai, and pair Davis with either Ken or TK! You have to, or else, get rid of that whole pyschological-substite crap! As for TK, well, that whole thing was... totally unexpected. If that was intended, well, it was a bad decision on your part. You need to introduce these feelings sooner, and no, I don't think "Tk looks like he's been wanting to tell me something" cuts it.
3.) Work on your writing... You may even want to fix the lemons quite a bit... I don't mean teh S&M or anything, because, well, that seems fine enough.
4.) Revise! This is a great idea! You just need to work on it a little more! You did a half-assed job on it, and it would be SO much better if you revised it! Trust me. I'm completely dissapointed, as are a lot of other people, I'm sure. (And I only comment on stories that I personally either like or think have pontential to be a good fic.) |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: February 02, 2003 17:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh wow. That story could have turned down many different paths. I didn't see this path happening though. Nice twists. |
Reviewed By: Warrior Goddess of Insanity On: January 16, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heehee. Beautiful! I agree with youur reasons for not making a sequel, it would just ruin the effect this story has. A great song and a great idea. See ya later. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this fic and I'm only 14. Cody and Tai r such jerks. I hope they die. DIIIIIIIIIIE. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Fox On: December 09, 2002 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOOOOOOOOOL |
Reviewed By: Tallulah On: November 28, 2002 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Well, this sure depressed me ^_^ the reason I gave it 7/10 is mainly because it's so painful and graphic, especially in Chapter 1. Not cos it's boring! Chapter 2 is better than Chapter 1 in my opinion although both are good. I really felt sorry for Davis and just wanted to hug him. Also I liked the contrast between the Yamasuke and the Kaisersuke. The only trouble with this fic is your style was a bit flat. You've since improved though so don't worry! And I will read Chapter 3 so tell me when you post! ^_^V |
Reviewed By: Warrior Goddess of Insanity On: October 27, 2002 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I love this fic. I really should have read it more often *thinks* I probably just couldn’t find it among the multitudes of amazing fics you have. I love the band. You should post more of your fics about them *shakes head* I get the horrible feeling that I’m going to be rereading all your stories as you post them. Damn, My internet bills gonna go up again. Did you know that all the rises in my internet bill over the past six months has been your fault. Thanks ^___^ Please post more stories soon! *has finished rambaling*
Magical Bamboo: Water me!
Nakago: Never! Never agin will you draw me in with your fake platitudes of sugar!! You will not get me hyper!!!
Magical Bamboo: I just want water!
Nakago: The Raven!!! |
Reviewed By: Kitt SSEH On: October 26, 2002 03:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Geh XD. Poor Daisuke *huggles him*. Hope the rest is up soon. ^^;;; |
Reviewed By: Rashika Star [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Thankies for posting it! *huggles you* |
