| "Survivior (Outlaw Star Style)" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Noriko On: April 16, 2004 16:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was creative, fun to read, and just downright hilarious. It took approximately 4 hrs to read this because I couldn't stop laughing and had to leave the room for awhile...a looooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnng-gah while. The next challange could be (whomever survives Genes cooking wins!)a digital game like tag, where they hit(not nessicarily hit but shoot) these monsters and huge... animal things on a red marked spotwith guns of their choise.I'd describe it more but I'm lay-za-eee lazy right now because my head and stomache hurts from all this laughing.(*Hey*,I just finished this about 3rty minutes ago and just crawled my way back to the computer.
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Reviewed By: ??????????????? On: April 30, 2002 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really quite a interesting fanfic. I'm hoping for the next one to be finished soon. Even though the spelling and grammer needed work, the story itself overrode it. I suggest this to anyone who hasn't read it and is a fan of outlaw star. Though the way Hazanko acts is really strange and Harry's obsession with Melfina is way exaggerated it turns out to be quite funny. I like to find out all the new challenges they have all the different twist that occur in the story. I really think Gene would be more possesive of Melfina and either kill or seriously hurt Harry. Otherwise, keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: kawaiiminor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2002 15:04 CST
Comment/Review:
you really need to work on your spelling of simple words..
its pretty cool, but thats crap that the other team got to steal malfina, and keep her! i thought things were going well!!!
i say they go against the rules and steal her back, or at least hold hilda ransom for her! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Hellbender 64 On: September 09, 2001 18:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very funny!! When you make the next survivor series, get Hansako voted off, or Gene!! Make Aisha to be the sole survivor, or Jim!! Plus you need to work on your spelling a little. Besides that, keep up the good work!! See ya!! |
Reviewed By: ChaosLord On: October 14, 2001 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh, this was pretty funny. Although you do need to work on the spelling a bit. :) |
