| "A simple poem" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: yami's slave On: November 09, 2003 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
these poems are ok although i think they would be better if they ryhmn. i actually write poems myself and i am very good at it(sry im bragging its a bad habbit-_-)but keep going 'cause practice makes perfect^_~
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Reviewed By: Jonez On: August 12, 2003 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Thanx for the Anzu (Tea) bashing! please continue on! |
Reviewed By: alliycat On: October 29, 2002 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok so i'm being gener-----asss oh well good pome, needs to rime and i agree with you i would like to see yami or yugi saer. buy buy |
Reviewed By: alliycat On: October 29, 2002 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok *slap,slap,slap,slap* there you go i slaped you. and this i an ok pome that can use a little work on it. all though who's liseing to me. ha . you can't because we are on a computer. ha . oh and thinks for killing what's her name!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: alliycat On: October 29, 2002 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok amber i think that you know how i am so up with the short and sempal. this pome was a varey good one because of the fact that it was good and that you made yami into two people... like so totally cool man!!!:-)(-: hahaha |
