| "up 2 date & timeless : A bulma and vegeta get togather fic" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
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Reviewed By: mickydrpepper14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it. |
Reviewed By: pupb6 On: January 01, 2003 14:35 CST
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LOVE the story.but i think ya mixedup chapter 3.ok well bye-bye. |
Reviewed By: w@// 0f i//u$i0N On: December 16, 2002 19:49 CST
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i luv it! pleeez hurry on the next chap. k?? this is really good! :) |
Reviewed By: Addicted On: December 14, 2002 19:56 CST
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Help! On chapter three it suddenly switched to a Cowboy Bebop story(I think)! Is there something wrong with my computer or are you trying to freak me out? |
Reviewed By: BelovedPrincessInsanity On: November 27, 2002 17:37 CST
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Font Color I'm so sorry everyone. MM wont let me sign on my name for some reason so I probably wont be updating very soon. As for the last chapter, i dunno HOW IT GOT TO BE THE ONE OUT OF MY BEBOP FIC!!! ya know the one (time of the month) it was supposed to be something totally different. sorry for the screw ups. Im thinking about continuing this story on ff.net or somewhere esle i dunno. But if u really want to read the rest of my story e-mail me at mimiwanamama@aol.com and I can give u the next chapters after |i wonder who it could be | kay??
oh yea, and i am SO HAPPY u all like my story. i was gonna delet it at first cuz i didn't know if i could come up with some ideas to finish it but clearly it worked out fine. and im workin on a new fanfic with Goku's mother & father in it. if u wanna see the first chapter of and my other new dbz fic with trunks and a new character i made up, u know where to e-mail me at. but tha one with trunks and my orginal character is some what of a dark fic so...im testing diff. levels of writing. ANYWAY PEA¢E and sorry for the mix up!
^_^ |
Reviewed By: BelovedPrincessInsanity On: November 27, 2002 17:31 CST
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| Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really great so far, except the last chapter looked like it came from Cowboy Bebop...Anyway I hope ya update soon ^_~
~Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One* |
Reviewed By: vinn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is looking really good
i will keep a lookout for when it is updated
i need to read more
soooo keep on writing |
Reviewed By: Omobolasire On: October 25, 2002 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic! Please continue! |
