| "Yin and Yang" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it's a pity you didn't finish this fic, or at least post the rest of it. I like it.
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Reviewed By: reader155365 On: June 11, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story the ending not so good but all together great job. it could use a few more chapters to wrap it up a little better but ur a great writer keep em commin
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Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 20:36 CST
Comment/Review:
noooooooooooo!! *cries* you havent updated in forever! MUST FINISH STORY... MUST FINISH STORY... damnit, the Jedi mind trick isnt working!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 18, 2002 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! No f*cking way! Please don't do this to me, Bulma can't be dead. If this doesn't cause her to miscarry I don't know what will. That friggin crew must've been paid by Kold to do what they did. Bastards!! I hope you update soon. I'll be biting off my fingernails till you do. Oh yeah, despite the angst this was a very good chap ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 23:56 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
YOU CAN'T KILL OFF BULMA!! THAT'S JUST NOT RIGHT!!! He has to save her!!! He just has too !!! PLEASE?!??!?!?
Love,
Tina |
Reviewed By: Dawn Dusk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
finish it! don't leave me hanging!! It's so good so far!! ^__^ I like the whole Frezia and Zarbon thing it's kinda funny how u got them 2 play a role in the story. any who keep it up! ^__~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 26, 2002 07:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, I can see why you decided to split up the story. One problem though, I can't access chap #8. I'll review as soon as I get to read it. |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I read this (or at least some of it!) before when it was part of the other story (Any Woman, Anytime, Anywhere) and I'm looking forward to reading it again! ^.^ |
