| "Lemon Fantasy" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS LEMON! You did a good job writing it. Could you write a Goku/Chi-Chi lemon? There really aren't enough Goku/Chi-Chi anything out there, so, please? |
Reviewed By: morgan On: November 26, 2002 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. very good |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 23, 2002 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,how did you ever learn to write the bestest lemons well..some of the best lemons I have ever read!? Make new chapters even though I know your probably all doing your homework and stuff X_Xlol
When your in the creativity mode make a new chapter pwease! |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That was REALLY GOOD!
Heh Naughty Bulma and Veggie-head :P. I love all your stories so BRING ON MUCHO LEMONY GOODNESS. Oh and PLEASE CONTINUE ASAP! ^^ Great job....Bura-chan |
Reviewed By: lemon luver On: November 18, 2002 14:19 CST
Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaaaah...when are you gonna update!?!?
itz driving me crrrazzzyy (@.@) |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god this is one awesome fic! i can't wait to read more...i'm hooked..lol i think i need to go to church and repent..poor priest..he sure would get an ear full!! lmao! |
Reviewed By: Buffyirl5009 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a relly good fanfic. PLease write more. I love that you have vegeta' characterisics are Pefect. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! That was a GREAT chapter. I can't wait to see how Vegeta and Bulma will deal with the fall out! Great job! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 08, 2002 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAH! bad bulma...that was very cruel..but i want to see vegeta and bulma actually stop messin like that and actually do it cuz they love each other(and i know that vegeta loves her because he actually fused with goku to save her ^_^) |
Reviewed By: ssj trungeta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 12:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great lemon. Please right the next chapter soon. I hope Bulma gets her real revenge this time! Say hi to Hobo for me! I love cats, but don't worry I won't sue! If I did who would right the next chapter? |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
looks like our favorite couple both got what they wanted!!! LOL. damn though, for god's sake Vegeta can be such as ass, and he has a fine one too!! BUT that's not the point, the point is that, sure all right, tell Bulma that you only want her for the sex, but why deny it to yourself?! don't worry, its not a personal thing, it's just...a personal thing FOR ME, has nothing to do with the author(s). but great job, and i will defintely be looking out for your updates. ciao for now. ~n. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 08, 2002 03:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dammit!! Bulma almost had him, almost got her revenge. Veggie picked a good time to become a SSJ. Men have such lousy timing. That was a great lemon and I can't wait to see what happens in Bulma's lab. Good job!! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 03:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooooh. BDSM = good. Vegeta's fantasy with the tail-play was especially nice. Mmmmmm. Tail. ;D |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT was soooooo funny, i like it how you kinda got the last chapter to start out as though it wasn't a fantasy, and then ended it with...well, i'm not gonna ruin the ending, you know what it was, i noe plenty of ppl that read reviews to find out whether or not the story's good b4 reading it. well, this story is damn HOT and wet too...if you get my drift..LOL ^_^ but it is sooooo funny, and damn your lemons are good...but, that's not the point is, it's the fact that Ms. Tina Lang has a decent, genuine plot behind the madness (LOL yea right) i noe sometimes that i only write stories for the lemons. but enough of my babble. great story, continue please...okey-doke? ciao for now.
~n. |
Reviewed By: Jasp_jedi4hire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2002 21:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Ha take that Vegita. hehehe I liked that last chapter. Poor Veggie such a let down that IT"S ONLY A FANTASY. Ha! SOrry I get carried away. ANyhow. Great chapter! |
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