| "Lemon Fantasy" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 On: November 03, 2002 07:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry...too lazy to log in!
You are doing a fantastic job! I can't wait to read the next installment! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa!! You're lemon @ lemons!!! ^^
CONTINUE SOON!!! CONTINUE I SAY!! BRING ON THE LEMONY GOODNESS!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 09:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great lemon!! I hope you continue with this story. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: October 26, 2002 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NO REALITY CHECK -LOL!! You're such a tease. I think Bulma would appreciate it if you were to transfer this little fantasy to the gravity room in the next chap ^_~. Super lemon :D. |
Reviewed By: Sara On: October 26, 2002 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggle*
Hehe, it feels kinda weird "enjoying" a lemon that was written by my sister! But I really like it! (Even if you weren't my sister I'd still like it! Go Tina!)
My recommendation is that you go for some kinkier stuff in the next chapter ... like domination or whipped cream or something! Those always spice things up a bit! And plots are good, too! (although not always necessary) ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Jasp_jedi4hire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 01:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn! that's a teasing ending. Are you going to add more? I kinda hope so it's good. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 21:31 CST
Comment/Review:
This was great! Update soon, what happens next! :P |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 04:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!
Awwwww, too bad it had to end -_-
You write good lemons!! ^^
Kinky!! =D
CONTINUE WRITING AS ALWAYS!! ^^
you should write more VB lemon one shots..
and maybe some VB stories with more story line!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: pritti poizn On: November 16, 2002 15:20 CST
Comment/Review:
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE!?!?! UR DRIVIN ME CRAZY....i want more lemon!! grrrrr** |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 07, 2002 11:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! that was a great lemon and i have to agree with most of the other reviewers that these lemons are wow! lemony!still....poor lil veggie-chan it was a lil daydream thats all...>_ |
Reviewed By: Legana On: November 10, 2002 10:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, nice =)
go veggie! lol
looking forward until next chap! |
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