| "The Invisible Man" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Ladye Black On: June 25, 2003 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, It got kinda confusing for like the last two chapters, but otherwise it was still good. Also, it seemed a little hurried. Still, I liked it. I hope you might consider writing another fic of this nature. |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 06:43 CST
Comment/Review:
gomen my comp doesnt like me right now it's:
Shinigami smiles apon thee,
~*~Dark Princess~*~
=^.^='''''' |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 06:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor hee-chan...has to do all that work AND in the presence of a blood thirsty Wu-man. then again i could make some REALLY ecchi coments about Quatre and Trowa. all in all i really like the way this is going. and do me and every one else a fav...have Miss Bitchcraft meet Wu-man and he go berserk on her ass.
Shinigami s,iles apon thee,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 16:35 CST
Comment/Review:
MUAHAHAHA...its like frankenstein gone wrong! this story is agreat; the ideas....hehehe...poor Wufei though. I hope Heero fixes him, and Duo is soo cute! And seemingly immortal...what will they get up to? And quatre adn trowa, or trowa and quatre...heh. awesome work! |
Reviewed By: Dewshine On: December 05, 2002 14:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, alright, you posted more! This fic is really moving along well. Definately never seen this plot before. Hope you write more soon!
Just one question though: How could Duo pick up Heero without killing him? I thought Duo killed people on contact. Then again, I have to admit that I didn't re-read chapter 4 before I read chapter 5, so maybe there was something in that that explained it, and I just don't remember. If that's the case, sorry for the question. |
Reviewed By: Ladye Black On: December 04, 2002 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! How could you leave off like that!*clears throat* But otherwise, very good write more, please? |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 20:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I will not start saying angry curses, I will not start saying angry curses,I will not start saying angry curses,I will not start saying angry curses... HOW COULD YOU LEAVE OFF LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN!!!!!!!! TELL ME PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! *ahem* pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee *puppy dog eyes* |
Reviewed By: Rude On: November 03, 2002 15:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it, but you are in for a ride... It`s sounds dificult to develop. unless you already have the plot developed.
Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: something like human [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's a great idea! loved it! i even like how you made duo older than heero. there are some spelling/gramatical errors in it though. and some spell check errors (you used 'sun' instead of 'son' at one point). but all in all, i'd like to see more of it! i'm curious as to what all they did to poor duo and what will happen to heero and his nasty parents. |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 17:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow! This loks like it's going to be really good! I hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: lemonaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaawwwwwwww poor hee-chan! sniff, you have to continue! |
Reviewed By: Ashlee Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yes, please continue!! It's all good so far! I wanna see what happens! Oh, and will you fling Heero's parents out of a window for me? A window on a very tall building preferably... |
