Reviewed By: Jess124 On: November 16, 2002 14:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review: I think this fanfic is really boring. You should really use some better words, my sister can write better than this! You should also work onyour spelling, and do some changing on the plot. I do admire your consideration for writing something where Bardock is in the present time, and not in flashbacks[ Request Review Removal ] |